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Adventure Time Meltdown Chapter 3
Chapter 3: Simon and Betty
Simon had stepped back and simply told her "No, Betty. I can't."
Betty shook her head, and hugged him. "Don't worry"
"I'm sorry Betty… I can't even touch you without making you feel uncomfortable, my cold… it's… it makes you-"
"No, I'll make you warm"
"How?"
Her lips and his met, Simon felt her warmth lips, he couldn't help but to kiss her back. He missed her so much, Simon thought he would never see Betty again. But there she was, she loved him as much as he loved her. It was true, it had to be.
To think that Betty would be willing to kiss an old man with white eyes, frostbitten skin and big nose, but it was because that man was him.
Betty's hands began to travel underneath his shirt, massaging her loved one's back. She knew he was cold, but she still felt she had to caress him. That's when she untucked his shirt, and began to feel lower.
Simon blushed when she realized Betty was unbuckling his belt. He broke their kiss with a soft gasp.
"B
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Adventure Time Meltdown Chapter 2
Chapter 2: Reunited with Betty
"Betty" whispered Simon.
The woman walked towards him "Sorry I came here like this, it's just that I'm looking for Simon Petrikov"
"I… I don't think you should look anymore"
"Is he?… oh no" Betty's eyes dampened but she tried to hold her grief.
Simon felt a knot on his throat; he didn't know what to think. What the woman he had been looking for was right there, the woman he missed dearly. And now he knows she missed him too, but him… he looked so different she couldn't recognize him.
Simon stood there frozen, feeling afraid of telling her the truth "Would she believe me? Does she even deserve to know about this?" he thought.
"Maybe I should leave, excuse me for the inconvenience sir" said the woman.
"Simon, what's wrong? Who's that lady?"
Betty turned her back and glanced at the older man and the little girl.
"Your name is Simon? Simon Petrikov? And is that what you carry a golden crown?"
"He is, and duh" replied Marceline.
Simon looked
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Adventure Time The First
Chapter 1: The Crown
Simon Petrikov was shopping around the docks of Northern Scandinavia. He was a young antiquarian from America, who'd been part of a local expedition, which was now over. The plane that was supposed to take him back to America wasn't schedule to leave for a few hours so he had some time to kill. A gust of wind blew a newspaper into, his leg. Simon peeled it off and looked at it.
"US and Russia on the break of war!" Read the headlines.
Simon just shook his head sadly.
"You think people would learn to get along better after two World Wars." Simon thought as he threw the paper into a recycling been.
Simon continued on shopping, when he came across an old dockworker.
"Hello...sir, you interested in treasure from the sea?" Asked the dockworker.
"What do you have?" Asked Simon.
The dockworker opened a small crate next to him and pulled out a golden crown, topped with three points and adorned with three red rubies. Simon stared at the crown in amazement.
"Oh my goodness! T
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Adventure Time Meltdown Chapter 1
Adventure Time: Meltdown
Chapter 1: Simon and Marcy in the camp
It was cold, and frightening… the street was empty, as expected. She walked to the direction she was told she could find him. "The archaeologist that carried around a golden crown" is how the survivors in the area described him and that was enough information for her to go out and try to find him. She knew that it was baseless faith that she could by chance find him, the plague was killing and mutating the humans beyond recognition, but she didn't care anymore, the woman couldn't think of anything else than to see her loved one… once more.
Simon woke up and put on his glasses, he looked behind to check on little Marcy, the toddler was sleeping peacefully besides him, there she was hugging her plush doll Hambo and sucking her thumb. Simon smiled at the little girl, and he felt his hand on her forehead "She's warm, good" he said very relieved. Simon stood up and walked for his backpack; the man kneeled and opened
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Chapter 3: Simon and Betty

Simon had stepped back and simply told her "No, Betty. I can't."

Betty shook her head, and hugged him. "Don't worry"

"I'm sorry Betty… I can't even touch you without making you feel uncomfortable, my cold… it's… it makes you-"

"No, I'll make you warm"

"How?"

Her lips and his met, Simon felt her warmth lips, he couldn't help but to kiss her back. He missed her so much, Simon thought he would never see Betty again. But there she was, she loved him as much as he loved her. It was true, it had to be.

To think that Betty would be willing to kiss an old man with white eyes, frostbitten skin and big nose, but it was because that man was him.

Betty's hands began to travel underneath his shirt, massaging her loved one's back. She knew he was cold, but she still felt she had to caress him. That's when she untucked his shirt, and began to feel lower.

Simon blushed when she realized Betty was unbuckling his belt. He broke their kiss with a soft gasp.

"Betty, what are you doing?" he asked bashfully.

Betty simply responded to that question by unbuttoning his waistcoat, then unbuttoned Simon's shirt a bit and she pressed her face against his cold chest.

Simon shivered a bit at her touch "Betty, are you sure of this? I don't think its a good idea… what if…?"

"Good idea? you are enjoying this"

"Yes… but, what if I hurt you?"

Betty smiled at him "everything will be fine" she pinched his cheek underneath his beard "I promise, Simon."

"What if it's not like that? what if it goes wrong? Betty, my princess. I love you and I don't want to put you in danger"

Betty looked at him directly into his eyes "I love you too, Simon."

"Oh, Betty" he sobbed.

She embraced him, her warmth was overwhelming, he loved it. He missed it dearly, feeling warm. The feeling everything was fine, Simon tried to pretend everything was fine, but it wasn't. He always remembered his own lie, but now he could forget everything was ruined.

Betty missed his old self, of course. But she loved Simon, not the body. She was willing to get close to this cold man. The man she loves was turned into this by the crown. She did not care, all Betty wanted was to make Simon feel better. Betty couldn't imagine the amount of pain Simon had been going through, ever since that day.

"Betty…" he sobbed.

Betty felt a knot on her throat, an empty hole in her chest… she could feel his pain. Poor man… this curse, he had no true malice. Why did he deserve this? why was destiny so cruel to Simon Petrikov?

Simon hugged her tightly and broke in tears…

Betty felt terrible, the pain, the sadness her loved one was feeling. If he was feeling like that, despite reuniting with her… how did he felt when he was alone?

The mere thought made her eyes dampen.

"Oh Simon, I'm sorry… I'm sorry."

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littleladylucifer Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Professional General Artist
Dude, you've made it so obvious that you're "editing", and scribbling out the signatures and putting an M there now as though you're trying to take credit, and not doing a very good job of it, are you really that out of ideas?
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strategischwelt Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
HOW DARE YOU STEAL Snowflake-owl's fanart!?
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littleladylucifer Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  Professional General Artist
And the work of many others.
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Shinjuku64 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017  Hobbyist Interface Designer
your artwork is stolen, and your real art is garbage.
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McCoy44 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2017
That is so tue. This jerk ripped off my Fanfiction and wrote a cheap knockoff garbage version of it.
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McCoy44 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2017
CommanderMs is a real scumbag. On Fanfiction.net he kept demanding that I put Peter Petrikov into my story, but I refused and he basically threw a tantrum and complained about it. I banned him and then he started writing guest reviews pretending to be other people, but I knew it was him because he wrote the same things he said in his previous review. I called him out and exposed his sorry butt in a author's note in my story and that seemed to stop him.

CommanderMs is absolute garbage.
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McCoy44 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2017
This person is a thief and a troll. Check out his Fanfiction page and you'll see. He goes by the name Commander M2.
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FoxBluereaver Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2017  Student Artist
I've seen your reviews at FF.net of Common Sense, and I have to ask: Why do you keep asking the author if he remembers this and that about the show, plus constantly pestering about what you want him to do? I don't think anybody likes an insufferable, know-knothing-know-it-all, let alone one who is constantly rambling about what they should or shouldn't do. Plus, given some comments about you and your actions, it's debatable that you might have actually written something by yourself, which casts your right to have a say into even further doubt.
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McCoy44 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017
Hi. I'm a guy that's been annoyed on FF.net by CommanderMs AKA Commander M2. On Fanfiction.net I go by the name Major144 and I have an Adventure Time fanfic called Family. Commander M2 wrote a bunch of cruddy reviews and pestered me about what he wanted in the story, but when I said no, he basically threw a tantrum like a spoiled brat and pestered me even more and made character demands. I finally got annoyed and banned him from reviewing my stories and from messaging me to get him to stop.

Then he did something even dumber. He started to post guest reviews and pretended to be other people, but he made the same idiotic demands so I knew it was him and publicly called him out in a chapter in my story. He stopped for a while, but then he started back up again.

Commander M2 also ripped off my story with his Adventure Time The First.

He is a self righteous self absorbed arrogant ripoff artist with no soul.  
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